yesterday Daniel and I went and shot a new sequence for th’ clip. we discussed with our tutor, Daniel, our progress. we agreed that our planes action in the clip needed something more. as you can see when the plane flies through Cuba St it remains quite static. the plane needs character in its movements. you can see in the scene we we shot on Thursday that the plane expresses more of this and comes across more interesting.

I think it will be smart to reshoot the Cuba St scene and to have the plane looping and moving through objects. I like the idea of the plane crashing, someone picking it up and rethrowing it. reinforcing the idea of communication. perhaps this person is communicating too?